Novel Summary 2
Ok, dragi cititori, nu am prea avut timp sa postez aici dezvoltari, dar macar am terminat si Novel Summary 2.
Partea a doua acopera ce se intampla de la sfarsitul partii intai (intalnirea lui Kei cu Sentiel) pana la midpointul romanului, cand ... err... nu pot sa va dezvalui ce se intampla. Va las in tensiune pana cand postez Novel Summary 3. De care m-am si apucat.
Bine, o sa mai postez si altele pana la Novel Summary 3, acum ca am intrat in vacanta... relativ.
Oricum, il gasiti aici:
Novel Summary 2
Partea a doua acopera ce se intampla de la sfarsitul partii intai (intalnirea lui Kei cu Sentiel) pana la midpointul romanului, cand ... err... nu pot sa va dezvalui ce se intampla. Va las in tensiune pana cand postez Novel Summary 3. De care m-am si apucat.
Bine, o sa mai postez si altele pana la Novel Summary 3, acum ca am intrat in vacanta... relativ.
Oricum, il gasiti aici:
Novel Summary 2
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2 Comentarii:
1. Z0 scapa in imbulzeala generala. I am not buying that... =)) Chiar atat de speriati au fost aia de magie incat s-au calcat cu sutele in picioare? Pentru ca altfel nu vad cum scapa el de-acolo fara sa-l intrebe nimeni de sanatate.
2. Faza cu Sen care pleaca, dupa care reapare... e weird. De ce ar pleca fara nici o explicatie (nici macar "She'll be back..."), pentru ca apoi sa reapara in 5 min?
3. De unde stia Sentiel zona in care erau, ca sa gaseasca The Hidden Cottage in The Hidden Rocks? :P
4. Parca e cam multa politica la un moment dat. Vopsea? Loool... da, sau ai putea spune ca se urca un paianjen pe el (din categoria -> scot component pouch, imi iau un paianjen si ma joc cu el)
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Gabriel Sandu, at 7/05/2005 12:54:00 p.m.
1. Yes, that's EXACTLY the point. Asa o sa zica si Kei (I'm not buying that), asa o sa zica si cititoru (I'm not buying that) ... anyway, it's intentional.
2. Ok, faza e de genul urmator: Sen este trezita intr-o situatie.. "sociala" (as in e cu cineva), o situatie in care basically nu se simte deloc comfortable. Asa ca does what her gots tell her to do, as in run. Ok, nu pleaca chiar fara explicatie, dar nici multe nu zice. Dar, as soon as she fades out of view, her heart and brain decide "wait this is interesting to see...", so she (secretly) spies on Z0 and Kei. And she's trying to build up the courage to, err, talk to people. And when she hears Kei's plans face ochii mari, si decide sa overcome her fear of ... people, you know... and "stick together".
Besides, you can't make a comeback if you haven't been anywhere :P.
3. Sentiel? She knows EVERYTHING. Well, not really, dar in ultimii ... err ... ani ... she's been, you know, ... wandering around. Like, she was a rogue lone ranger typ-a-girl, you know? They always know the Hidden Stuff. Look at Aragorn (son of Arathorn).
4. Yeeeeeesss, my point exactly, but, i was really stuck around this point. Adica, si eu as vrea o bucata mai simpla acilea, dar nu am gasit altceva care sa tina apa.
DAR (there's always a butt) vestea buna este ca, dupa cum (probabil NU) stii, romanul va fi First Person Perspective, memorialistic, a lu' Kei (duuh). Now, aceasta perioada, tipu' nostru nu va tine focusu' textului pe the political shit. That's not the part he enjoys remembering most. The focus will be on... Sen. Bine, si faptu' ca Z0 acts a bit bossy and focuses on the plan while Kei focuses on the girl (yeah, who got the better deal here).
Anyway, punctele 2 si 3 ma ingrijoreaza un pic, but I hope they'll be clearer in the novel. Hell, at one point Kei can come up to Sentiel and say:
"A cui e acest Hidden Cottage(tm) dintre Hidden Rocks(tm)?"
La care ea, ganditoare...
"... al nostru, acum."
Oh, this reminds me ca I really have thought very little of the whole Sen's personality in Part 2 (yes, I know a lot more of her personality in Part 3). bummer.
Thanks for the feedback, as usual.
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Danutsu, at 7/05/2005 10:23:00 p.m.
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